My FIrst Posted Story....

MANZENTI-73 was one of the best orbit prison bases the universe had ever established. Over ten thousand dollars went into the building of the giganitc rectanglular structure that orbited the seven moons of Nebula 54a. This was where the most diabolical of evil men come to spend all of eternity, with no hopes of an escape.

A small ship flew through the black space as it headed towards MANZENTI, its boosters on the back pushing it at an extreme rate of velocity. The ship looked like it had seen better days, the panneling was no longer bright white, but instead, a mixture of dark gray and brown from the rust. Windows were smered and the wings looked dented. This was a prisoner transport ship, coming in with new arrivals.

"Wakey Wakey Mr. Gandral!" a guard by the name of Maxis yelled as he he would bang his club stick against the bars of one of the large cages inside of the ship. Inside was a man with long black hair that covered his face except for white glimmering teeth. His orange shirt was ripped and was full of holes, and he had the stench of blood all over him. The prisoner did not move from his bed, and Maxis clentched his fingers around the club, his knuckles turning ghostly white.

"Goddamnit man!" He yelled with furocity as he bashed the club against the bars again, causing the man to jump from his bed and to the floor. "I said get the hell up! You may have been Mr. Bad-Ass out on Zeria, but in this ship, you are nothing more than scum compared to me! Now...get..up Mr. Grandal!"

The prisoner named Grandal stood up slowly, his bone cracking relentlessly as he stood upright, a tower of a man. He was slender, almost like someone just took a skeleton and slathered it with skin, eyes, and teeth. Along with his long hair, he had a beard which reached his upper torso. He outstretched his fingers, slender and bony, and he gave Maxis a horrid smile.

"Why thank you for letting me know that we are home." Grandal said with a little giggle as he looked at the guard with fierce crimson eyes. Maxis shivered at just the sight of the man, but that giggle made him weak to his knees.

((this is what i have so far))